The Unexpected
Aiden B.Age 9
Pencil and Color Pencil
A bear was trying to be sneaky, he crept up on an old abandon house with a baseball bat in the rain. Suddenly… THE UNEXPECTED came. That bear wasn’t prepared for it. He wasn’t very clever after all!
I like your abandon house. It is very creepy. Was the bear going to destroy the house because it looked creepy? Did the house cause the lightning to strike the bear to protect it self?
ReplyDeletethe bear did want to destroy the house, but the house didn't make lightning strike. It was unexpected!
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